Sunday, November 14, 2010

Dorothy Gish [Blocking]

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I've been working on this dialogue piece in my spare time at home.

Feedback always greatly appreciated!

1 comment:

Othon "Tony" Castro said...

Travis!!!

Whats up man. Great stuff the biggest thing that caught my eye was at about 7 seconds as he is saying Dorothy Gish his left hand (screen right).It needs a little more life. Your character has such beautiful hand gestures through out the shot but it dies a bit in that part.It doesnt need to be much just a tiny bit to keep the rhythm. I know your still blocking so you might of caught that already. Over all though a fine job as usual. Great seeing your work again bud.

Peace,
Tony